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All Deviations
All Deviations


I often miss the times we shared
The yummy scent of your chocolate hair
To all the classes you made me late
To see your shining eyes I couldn't wait
I often miss your goofy smile
It gave me joy, if only for a while
How nervous you made me I can never say
But you touched my heart in so many ways
Your wonderful scent still lingers here
On those little trinkets I hold so dear
I often miss your arms around me
How safe I felt, and loved, and carefree
I wish now, I'd said more to you
How much I hid you never knew
I guess right now karma got me back
You're gone someplace else, just like that
I didn't even have time for a proper goodbye
I can still feel your heart and still see you cry
You taught me to cry, taught me to love
What I gave in return was never enough
I'd do it all over again, just for you
I'd be loving and caring and honest and true

I miss you, do you miss me too?
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She's gone. Moved to some christian school and left so suddenly I thought it was a dream.

Life sucks right now.
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~taurusjr:icontaurusjr: May 15, 2008, 7:25:02 PM
WOW THAT WAS DEEP.
~TofuKitteh:iconTofuKitteh: May 15, 2008, 7:33:00 PM
I honestly can't tell if you're being sarcastic. xD

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Love is simply love. It has no set paths or rules or dictations. You know it when you love someone. Isn't that enough?
~TofuKitteh:iconTofuKitteh: May 15, 2008, 7:42:07 PM
Thanks for the comment shugg. :3

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Love is simply love. It has no set paths or rules or dictations. You know it when you love someone. Isn't that enough?
~FoxYokai:iconFoxYokai: May 15, 2008, 7:50:17 PM
That was beautiful, Carrie. ;3;
I'm sure that you'll have Hope back in your arms some day. Some day very soon.

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"I could use pants." -Slowking, Pokemon 2000
~TofuKitteh:iconTofuKitteh: May 15, 2008, 7:53:24 PM
I hope (psh) I will too. I really miss her..

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Love is simply love. It has no set paths or rules or dictations. You know it when you love someone. Isn't that enough?
~hopefullullaby:iconhopefullullaby: May 26, 2008, 11:23:50 AM
I really like your poetry, hope you can tell I\'m gonna watch you =P

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♪♫Relief exists I find it when..I am cut..
~TofuKitteh:iconTofuKitteh: May 26, 2008, 11:25:48 AM
Awwwweee. x33 Thanks, you. C:

And I'll be watching you right back. >O

This is one of my better and happier [ C: ] poems. ;333

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o(")(") Bunzz.
~hopefullullaby:iconhopefullullaby: May 26, 2008, 11:39:11 AM
So, apparently in person I'm far from emo, well I know I don't have the emo look. I've been told that my writing can be a bit emo. I don't usually openly show any of it to people, or even my photos until I believe they are done you know? Although they never really are done, cause art is never finished, but when I feel the pieces are ready you know?

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♪♫Relief exists I find it when..I am cut..